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100WC but than the flash made me

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Prompt:

But then the flash made me…

Goal:

to make it an Autobiography

Story:

Hi my name is Mackenzie.

I have been blind ever since I was born and now I am 12-years-old. Last year I was able to see for the first time

Let me talk to you about that moment.

I was in the hospital and all I could hear was my mum saying it was nearly done. I heard a flash and then I saw a flash but then the flash made me be able to see everything and everyone for ever. It was an astonishing, remarkable feeling.

That I will never forget.
Because I have the privilege to see everything…

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2 Comments to

“100WC but than the flash made me”

  1. August 8th, 2017 at 9:19 am      Reply libby2016 Says:

    I love the way you have structured this piece Ebony. The short, sharp sentences build up the anticipation of the resolution to the problem. Well written.


  2. August 9th, 2017 at 8:44 am      Reply Harguan Says:

    Hi Ebony
    I really liked the way you wrote the 100WC and I think you used the prompt really well. I think you did an outstanding job!


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